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Review:lia_2390 says:
Hey Rin,

This was nicely written, well done. I love your characterisation of Victoire here, for once she wasn't the perfect, statuesque blonde that most people portray her as. As the eldest child, she wasn't the mummy's favourite either, nor was she her gran's. She wasn't born with a skill but had to be forced into it. I love that at the end, she releases all her inhibitions and does what she wants to do.

I also like that she sort of respected her grandmother's honour and continued dancing. Was that for some sort of acceptance? Or am I misinterpreting your meaning?

What I love most of all is that you made Victoire real.


Author's Response: Oh, Lia! Thank you so much! That means a lot to me.

It had just occurred to me when I started writing that I hadn't written any stories where Victoire is... human. She's always so... I dunno, perfect, like you said. So I wanted to change that. I'm really glad you liked it, because I'd never done it before and it was a little iffy when I was writing it. Thank you!

Yes, I'd say acceptance. :) Kind of a... "Well, I really don't have a choice now, do I?"

Thank you so much! You've made my week.

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