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Review:Northumbrian says:
Short and fluffy and full of great descriptive passages, there really isn't much that I can say. But:
The Author Note made me laugh. A picture is worth a thousand Worfs. That's an awful lot of Klingon security officers. (-;
On to the story.
I'm a big fan of good opening lines and this is a good opening line.
And good closing lines, oh, guess what? That's good too.
This is short sweet and well written, what more can I say? All I can do is make two very petty observations.
Unless maneuvered is an American spelling I'm not aware of, you've misspelt manoeuvred.
If Victoire is "not necessarily short" does that make her unnecessarily short? Sorry, but that wording seems a little odd. What you're saying (I think) is that she isn't short, simply shorter than he is.
Pedantically yours

Author's Response: Ah, yes. The typo. It is waiting in validation to be fixed, hahah.
It is indeed very fluffy. I guess I wasn't feeling dramatic that day.
It is the American spelling, actually. I usually leave spellings as American because it bothers me when my computer tells me the British way is wrong.
That is kind of awkward wording, isn't it? Thanks for pointing it out.

Thanks for the review Neil! (:

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