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Review:AndrinaBlack says:
I loved this story. The AN really explained why it felt so real, because it's reality for you. But you also have Ginny in character so it seems very real for her that way too. I actually thought moments before I read the part about her being independent, that she really has to be independent in her life whether she wants to or not, as she doesn't seem to have really close friends in her own year as she hangs out with the trio so much and as Harry leaves.

Like I said in some way already, the emotions really came through well in this. Somehow I think the right feel about it also came from how you described the weather and surroundings. It somehow felt similar to when the trio and Ginny were spending time together out in the Hogwarts grounds at the end of HBP, so the atmosphere gave some kind of familiarity to it. Talking about that, I also liked your descriptions, not too much but enough and well worded. Somehow I especially loved the part "painting the walls wildly yellow". Great job with the story!

Author's Response: Hi Andrina!

Thanks so much for reviewing! I agree with your thoughts about Ginny being independent. Sometimes I think she's a little too independent for her own good...kind of like I am. Sometimes it's nice to be able to to just let yourself breathe and lay your burden on someone else! haha.

Yeah, when I wrote this I was certainly in a state, but I'm glad that my descriptions and things were fine. When going back and reading this now, I can still picture how I felt in that moment, so I guess I did alright haha. The descriptions of the sunlight beckoning to her is actually my favorite bit in the story so I'm glad you liked that!

I'm sorry it's taken me so long to get back to you, I really appreciate you taking the time to read this!


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