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Review:witch_in_training says:
Wow. That's... awful. How can someone be so horribly prejudiced? I wanted to hit the Auror the whole time, for being so unreasonable and harsh.

And poor Remus -- absolutely everyone he loves is gone now, and he's getting blamed for it! The ending... again, wow. It just hits you right in the stomach. I really wonder what the Auror had to say to that, but it was a perfect line to end with.

Lovely entry, Miranda! Loved the prompt usage :)

Sami

Author's Response: Hello and thanks so much!!

Yeah, isn't he awful. Originally, the Auror wasn't supposed to be so inhumane, but I got the idea for the last line and keeping the indentity of the prisoner more or less secret, and it kind of sprung from there. But, it was odd writing from the perspective of such a nasty piece of work.

Empathy is one of those things I'm always striving for as an author, and I'm glad this short little one shot left you with an emotional reaction. And I thought it would be a unique take on the prompt!

Thanks so much again!

Miranda


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