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Review:Verity the Clerk says:
This one hurt. It's beautiful and horrible and haunting and triumphantly tragic. Poor, poor Ariadne. Great job balancing the loveliness of the first part of the story and the decidedly shadowy undertones without revealing too much. And then the second part... Really, dear, you just about broke my heart.

Not to be too obnoxious, I caught a couple little spelling errors, both in the fourth to last paragraph:
> "lead" should be "led" in the second sentence
> "copping" should be "coping" in the fourth sentence

Sorry if that's a little nit-picky, but otherwise your prose is flawless. Thanks for sharing!

Author's Response: Not at all, thank you so much! I'm a horrible editor of my own work so I love it when people point out my mistakes - otherwise they'd sit there forever haha :) I'll fix those ASAP.

I'm so glad you enjoyed it! I don't write things like this often - I'm much more of a fluff girl myself! - so it's always enjoyable to break from the usual :) And when people enjoy it's a billion times better! Thanks so much, again, you're so lovely :)

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