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Review:witch_in_training says:
Hey Zinny!

This adds so much more depth to Charlie, and why he moved all the way to Romania. Yeah, sure, working with dragons is fun and all, but it makes you wonder if he couldn't have found something equally as exciting closer to home. Of course, if you throw Remus and Tonks into the mix this way, close to home is exactly the last thing he'd want.

I love Charlie's thoughts in parentheses, especially when he's correcting Tonks on how long it's been since they've talked, and when he's horrified that Remus calls her Dora.

This was sweet, sad, and beautiful. I feel awful for Charlie, even though I can't bring myself to feel angry at Remus or Tonks. It just goes to show, you never know who might get hurt by someone else's happiness.

Have a lovely day!

Sami

Author's Response: Sami, lovely! I'm so glad you gave this a read!

I always thought there was an extra something to Charlie, and you're spot-on! Romania is such a far off (and random) place, and I was silently theorizing as I was reading the whole series that Tonks was a driving force in his traveling their for work. Because really, it just makes SO much sense! XD

I'm glad you liked the parenthesis! I dunno where they came from really, but I suppose that's how I imagine Charlie's brain working - scattered thoughts that just sort of pop up here and there. Am I making sense? I don't think I am. :P

Oddly enough, I don't dislike Remus/Tonks together. I resent Tonks a bit - that's true, but I love Remus too much too actually hate the one thing that makes him happy. Of course, Charlie/Tonks is just all sorts of perfection (if she had been smart :P) and yep, the whole 'someone else's happiness' bit is exactly what I was going for.

Thanks so much for the review, lovely, I really appreciate it!

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