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Review:HopelessRomantic_x says:
Hey, I'm one of the people who's doing the 1,000 words challenge as well and I stumbled across yours and decided to give it a read (:

I loved how you've written this, it really brings out so many emotions and so much information in such a little amount of words. It felt like I was Molly and I was having the same confusion about the word 'love' as well. It was a struggle to find out what it actually means when you say it and when you mean it and it was the emotions that really hit me when I had finished this.

I love how you've adapted different relationships that could be love, from parents to sisters to grandparents to uncles and aunties and cousins and boyfriends. There are so many variations of love that can be used in the different relationship you have with different people and I think you highlighted this well especially (:

I also loved the characterization of Molly, I've never really read her as a main character before and the only other times I have read about her she's a replica of Percy but you've brought so much depth to her than a lot of people would realise about someone like Molly. That she isn't just the daughter of Percy Weasley but she's an actual person who is different and unique in her own way and has as much to deal with just like everyone else.

I loved reading this and to be very honest I think you have a really good chance of winning the challenge (:

x

Author's Response: Hey! Fun challenge, huh? :)

I haven't read too much Molly-centric either, but I do know that she's often portrayed as a female, slightly watered-down version of Percy. It's plausible, I'm not saying it's a bad characterization (provided she isn't, like, CARBON COPY), it just wouldn't have worked with this.

I tried to make it raw, genuine emotion, something that everyone could understand. Everyone's said the different "I love you"s -- maybe not all of them, but some, and I'm glad you thought I portrayed that well :)

Thank you for reviewing! Wow, you really think so?! I'll have to take a look at yours when it's up.

Sami

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