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Review:LindaSnape says:
This was (to sound completely juvenile) awesome!

The last line especially was very good. I thought that it tied the story together very nicely. I also adore the idea of Blaise wanting to see and Theodore wishing that he couldn't.

I loved your characterizations of Blaise and Theodore. Blaise was just as cool and calm as one would anticipate despite the fact that as the story progresses one finds that he cannot even trust his own mother. Theodore on the other hand seems timid, but he isn't willing to admit this.

I also appreciate the fact that you used minor canons to explore threstrals. Not Luna, not Harry, but Theodore Nott. I really like that. Not to mention, Blaise rarely gets enough attention - especially not in a way that could be considered canon. (Hermione/Blaise? Please.)

This, however, I could easily see happening in the canon, and I really thought you pulled this off well.

I love the contrast between the pair. I think that's what makes this story so interesting.

Your descriptions were wonderful, as well as your word choices. There was nothing jarring that disrupted the flow, which is always a nice thing.

As far as spelling and grammar go, I didn't catch any errors.

All in all, this was a very short but enjoyable read.

Great job!


Linders

Author's Response: Oh, thank you! Your reviews are always so lovely and in-depth :)

I'm glad you liked their characterisations. That was sort of the whole idea behind this - the fact that they're so different but they have this one huge similarity drawing them together.

Blaise really deserves more attention because, when you think about it, he's such an interesting character. I mean, a Slytherin narcissist with a murderess for a mother? What's not to love! (And I agree - where on earth did Hermione/Blaise come from?)

I intended this to be a bit of a missing moment and I'm a bit of a canon freak, so that's great to hear!

With constantly switching POVs I was a bit worried about how well it would flow, so I'm relieved you didn't think there was anything jarring :)

Thanks so much for reviewing!


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