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Review:peppersweet says:
That last line is awesome! I absolutely love the contrast here between Theodore's disgust at death and the Thestrals and Blaise's morbid curiosity and desire to see them. I found the jumping POV between their two experiences of death a little bit confusing to begin with, but it made sense after a while as it made the two stories knit together, in a way, which served to highlight the differences between them. Double thumbs up for the use of minor Slytherin characters too! A short but lovely little piece (:

Author's Response: Minor Slytherins are the best! I love them. I just think they're all so fascinating and you can do so much with them - Blaise and Theo particularly so, which is why I chose them. I just think both of them had such dodgy upbringings that they must be really messed up...

I'm glad the jumping made sense, because I was worried it might be too confusing and just throw the whole thing off. I tried always to make it clear who was who, and as long as it made sense eventually I'm happy xD

Thanks so much for the lovely review! I'm really glad you liked it :)


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