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Review:Margravine says:
I LOVE THIS! And I didn't even guess she was you til the end, when I remembered you play piano.

I meant to leave you a review for Starving Artists, which was brilliant as usual, but was sidetracked on my way by your irresistable summary and bewitching banner!, Overall, it was very fresh, original and I think the gold star goes for actually managing to make it believable characterisation despite how different from fanon it is. I love that you put more to Narcissa, ESPECIALLY intellectual bigotry rather than just 'we hate muggles', was interested that you made Andromeda a weaker character than she usually is and I just can't tell you how much I enjoyed the society vs Narcissa theme you built up.

Add in the five sugars I get mocked for (Ok, I'm down to two, three at most, because I have 2-6 cups of tea a day and I want to live to middle age :P) and you have one of loveliest one shots I've read in some time!

Author's Response: Phew! It was believable enough after all! I was worried that I hadn't deviated from her character much at all! I had to keep the whole bigotry and 'muggles suck' thing in there so she could talk to Lucius, and, well, erm, it kind of went from there. As for Andromeda...well, I imagine Bella would be pretty terrifying when she's angry, hence Andromeda goes all weak and Narcissa has a panic attack. It must be amusing to watch (:

And, oh, the society vs Narcissa thing is thankfully not something I come across in real life, but I have a habit of completely ignoring simple rules and then getting shirty with people who try to correct me. Maybe I got that across? I don't know, but I like how much I did actually get across (:

A fellow five sugar-er! Even if you do cut down, then it's nice to see that I'm not the only one who needs half a ton of the granulated stuff to drink tea properly (:

Thank you very much for the lovely review! :D

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