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Review:Ilasia says:
Oh, Annie, this may just be my favorite chapter so far! There was something about it that was just very poetic and I totally loved it.

Hestia, I think, could not be more humane in this. Her emotions are totally spot-on and completely believable, and I'm just in awe of how well you've characterized her. What really struck me was when she was comparing herself to Hera - it flowed almost effortlessly, and the bit with Susie Homemaker and Eugenia Bookworm was just really, really clever and beautifully written all-around.

I wish I could find the right words to say how much I enjoyed this chapter, but I tend to review when it's late and my brain is half shut off. So apologies for my much-to-be-desired vocabulary in this review. :P

Anywho, loved it! Can't wait for more ♥

Author's Response: Zinny! Hey!

Your favorite chapter yet? Oh wow! This was a hard chapter for me to write actually. I couldn't quite get the meeting of Hera and Ryan to flow quite right, so I ended up not writing them meeting specifically and trying to show it all through what Hestia was feeling. I'm so happy that it turned out well! Hera really is a Susie Homemaker, but its almost like watching a bull in a china shop, because she could do so much more. She's a really complex character.

Anyway, thanks for taking the time to review and I'm glad you liked this so much!

Annie


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