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Review:propertyoftheHBP says:
Yet again, this was just perfect. I loved the new aspect and perspective of it, of a prisoner in Azkaban. The thought progression that Sirius's mind goes through in this is just fantastic. He goes from feeling that he deserves to be in Azkaban without a doubt to cursing Peter and knowing that he should be there instead of himself. I'm pretty sure that he still feels the former while feeling the latter and vice versa, but the way his thoughts are just running everywhere...like the last three parts, it's just great.

The part with the line "Pun intended," after the mention of "dogging" Peter "to the death" would make me crack up hilariously in most circumstances and stories. But here it just makes things all the more darker. I can just see Sirius losing his sanity here...and I shudder at the thought of how worse it would have been if he wasn't an Animagus. You've written that aspect of it perfectly, as well--his characterization just fist someone in Azkaban so well.

And the part with him punching the wall, over and over--the "(punch)" every few words/thoughts just added to the visualization so much and it really conveyed the emotion, power, and pain well. Then in the end where he's thinking about how getting Peter "was the only thing he had to look forward to," is just so heartwrenching. He really has no life now, almost, but not quite as bad as Remus.

I loved this just as much as I loved the past three. These were an amazing set of stories that you wrote fantastically well. I enjoyed them so much, and like I said in one of my previous reviews, they're bringing up so many questions and thoughts that would have never went into my mind if I hadn't read this and your characterizations hadn't been so incredibly amazing and emotional. An easy and beyond 10/10 for each piece and I'm favoriting this. :)

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