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Review:Alopex says:
Haha, Hermione's reaction to the events of the previous chapter at the top of this chapter were fun to read. Yep, she's the same ol' Hermione, getting her buttons pushed. But by now, she's mature enough not to totally fly off the handle, I suppose.

I liked the way she handled Pokey to figure out what life was like at Malfoy Manor and what sort of orders he was under--much of her probing was very discreet and clever. I'm impressed at her shrewdness. Also, she's ver observant, which of course helps you describe the setting to the readers. ;)

A disease, hm? This bodes ill. And she's an unwelcome guest at Malfoy Manor? That's the understatement of the century.

Author's Response: It's funny how, even as an adult, she can't help having an emotional reaction before her rational side kicks into gear. I guess it goes along with being a Gryffindor. But she is able to at least contain her emotions instead of shooting canaries across the room (I really want to have her do that now, oh no).

I'm not entirely sure whether making Hermione so observant and shrewd is a good thing, but it does help with descriptions and atmosphere, as Draco cannot be relied upon for either of those. Maybe I'm making the mistake of identifying myself with Hermione, but whether I am or not, I'm glad that it's working for you. :)

It's fun making up a random disease, you know. :P It's only there for the sake of the romance, of course, which makes it only more random. Haha, this is an insane story, and now you're making me want to write more of it! Thank you (I think). ;)

I really appreciate you taking the time to read and review this story. ^_^


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