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Review:angeless7fallenstarsong says:
:) I loved this!

By your second paragraph, your poignant writing style is obvious ("The sea sang her name, but she turned her back to it."). You also create an atmosphere of curiosity ("She was not safe there, where she might have been found"), which draws the reader in. :)

Something that I really liked was your play between Helena and the cold, and how it follows her in her misery until it consumes her at the end of the story.

I think that this must have been the first Founders era piece I've ever read. You've written this so well it's made me want to go and read more... I'd love to see this turned into a novella or short story. :D Please?

Anyway, thanks for a great read. Ta ta!

Author's Response: Thanks for the awesome review! This challenge is a really interesting one because Alopex gave us so many different elements to play with - so I needed to make the season relevant to the character. I've neglected this story for awhile and am going to try to update soon. This will ultimately be a collection of 4 one-shots, though this chapter will be the only Founders Era.

You really should check out some more Founders! It was never really my thing, but I have read some Founders fics that really sucked me in. There's one by celticbard that comes to mind, and also one by GirlDetective85. If you're ever interested in reading more Founders, you should PM me - I can give you a few recommendations. ^_^

Thanks again for the great review!

Melanie

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