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Review:padfoot4ever says:
I'm here with your review request! First things first: Why didnt you warn me to bring tissues when reading? This was SO upsetting! So moving! So BRILLIANT! Usually when I give reviews I like to offer some criticism: but I can't think of anything to criticise! I dont nitpick! So let me move on to swooning and praise!
Your characterisation of Molly and Arthur was perfect. It's what made the story so beautiful. They are the Molly and Arthur JKR created, and you've ended their story the same way I think she would. I can feel Molly's pain when I read this chapter, her complete devastaion that the one constant in her life has died. God, you're good! I can feel my heart breaking!
I loved the flow, and the transitions between scenes, which I know you were concerned about. I love how the flashbacks go back further in time each time. I love how the line 'you better sit down' is repeated. The flashbacks were placed perfectly between the Healer delivering Molly the bad news.
I also love your style of writing, especially your description of Molly and the ward at the beginning; it really sets the scene. And I LOVE how there are absolutely no spelling or grammar mistakes; this one-shot is literally perfect. Well done!

Author's Response: Heather! -squishes-

Thank you so much for this review. I'm quite sorry I didn't warn you to bring tissues, I guess after editing this to bits for the writathon, I forgot how emotional it could be the first time reading it. I'm THRILLED that I was able to actually encapsulate that much emotion into this fic. It's wonderful to hear that even though I use sudden transition, the transitions still work here. I sort of was trying for the fading in and out sort of style, since I'm sure Molly was having trouble focusing at the moment.

Thank you so much. You're compliments really made me blush, which is an accomplishment since I'm v. sunburnt at the moment. I'm glad you enjoyed this!

xx
Melissa

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