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Review:Amberfire says:
Yey new chapter :D
I quite liked it, it was a very different take on the transformations to what I think I would have written and it was all the more interesting for that. I'm looking forward to human Remus and Addie though, the chapter felt like it was missing something by not having them in speaking roles for most of the chapter.

The transformation was well thought out and I liked the description of the actual change and the stages involved. It was very interesting and I liked hearing about every stage they went through. It was rather cool how you wrote about Remus' reaction and Addie's as well for most of the changes. Very interesting :D

I'm so glad you updated because I was really looking forward to a new chapter :D Especially after all those revisions of the last chapter that made me think there was new chapter! ;)

Thanks so much for updating :D
Amberfire

Author's Response: Yeah, it was really hard to write this chapter without any dialogue haha. But, I tried to make the transformations a little different from what people usually describe them. And if Addie wasn't a werewolf, I wouldn't have spent this much time on a transformation, but since she is, it was important to write it all out. Usually people just write 'the skin ripped off and fur grew. then the bones changed shape', but I really wanted to get into it since a lot of people were looking forward to the transformations :]

Anyway, I just updated after not updating forever! :D
Haha, yeah, if you see me making revisions, that means a new chapter's coming ;]


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