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Review:witch_in_training says:
That was sweet. :) I've never seen a fic where the Malfoys actually make this decision up-front. I like that Lucius chose his family over Voldemort. I wasn't expecting that.

I never imagined that Narcissa would anyone, not even Lucius, that Harry was alive until Harry actually showed it for himself, but I suppose it could have happened, and it fits with the story's idea that Lucius finds his family more important.

The only thing I have qualms about is the use of capitalization instead of italicizing. It looks neater when you use italics to stress a word. ;)

Sami

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