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Review:lia_2390 says:
Hi again, celtic ^_^

This has to be the second fic I read today that's based around some kind of mythology/legend or at least mentions it. I really like how you've interwoven the themes so that they make for a very fascinating piece of work. What made this even more fascinating is when the bird-watchers took the picture, they saw a girl instead of the swans. It's rather creepy if you think about it.

I love Jimmy's character, he's daring that one. I found it funny that he called her after ten when she specifically told him not to but she answered the phone anyway. Seriously, I love little things like that.
What I love even more is that you chose Molly with absolutely no mention of any other next gen character. Usually they come in large groups...I'm guilty of that myself.

Now to address your author's note, this isn't awkward at all and for the record, romance doesn't have to be out-right mushy either, I thought this was written rather well. Like I said in the review for Bootstraps, it's good to get out of your comfort zone for a while to write something you haven't done before. You may end up surprising yourself too.


Author's Response: Hi Lia!
Thank you so very much for the kind review! I'm really starting to feel spoiled by all your fabulous feedback. You've been such a supportive reader. I honestly cannot thank you enough.

I'm so glad you liked this story. I'd never really written Next-Gen before, so I wasn't sure how this fic would turn out. I'm also happy to hear that you enjoyed the character of Jimmy. I had originally planned for him to be more esoteric, but then he sort of grew and changed as the story progressed.

Again, thank you so much for your encouragement! I really do appreciate your thoughtful comments. Take care and be well!


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