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Review:Violet Gryfindor says:
Was Viktor the crazy guy at the Quidditch match? It's the only reference I can think of at the moment. *is unsure*

Again, brilliance. Very not fair that you can do this. It's a turbulent story, and while I can keep up fine, I don't know if Louis can. And then you throw in a girl at a bar. Recipe for trouble, even if he's with Annah. The girl must be quite something if she's more attractive to Louis than Annah. It definitely throws a wrench into an already-creaky machine.

The best part was with Dom at the Portkey Centre. Not only is that place an amazing idea - that airport is so insanely busy anyway that there can't be that many Muggles noticing the wizards - but Dom is the most insane(ly funny) character. She's the perfect older sister - suffocating and controlling - but really, if Louis had to live without her, he would likely fail. and/or get beat up by hairy hit-wizards. ;)

Only one more chapter left. *tear* But it's still a happy feeling to be almost caught up with at least one story on my favourites list. ;)

Author's Response: My completely hilaro Viktor reference was kind of completely marginalised by a misspell that really quite ruined it. Wasn't him though.

SO turbulent! I'm thinking maybe even a little bit too turbulent? Probably need to calm things down a bit. Just a chapter or two of some relative stability. Oh I'm all about the trouble, do feel a bit for Louis but this is just way more fun.

That sort of thing is some of my favourite to write about. The whole fitting the magical world into the Muggle one. I love how it's all very much hidden in plain sight, a Portkey Centre at Heathrow would definitely take things to another level though!
The Dom-Louis dynamic is always funny to play with. I actually think they're really quite dependent on each other - definitely not just a one way thing. He doesn't have a controlling influence on her, but he does have a moderating one. And you've covered the other side of it better than I could!

*SADFACE* Guess I'll just have to write some more then! Only one review to go now, my turn to be all *tear*


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