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Review:Ilasia says:
The fact that I haven't reviewed this is simply ridiculous, as it's all sorts of amazing and I love it very much. We'll just blame my horrific procrastination for the not-reviewing-until-five-chapters-in thing, yeah?

Alright, so! I am falling hard for this bad-boy James of course. You oftentimes see him portrayed as a carbon copy of his grandfather, all jokes and mischief and whatnot, but James' characterization in this is really good, and a total breath of fresh air as well. And James II is my favorite too, so I'm supremely picky with how he's portrayed - I totally adore him in this though, so that should give you an idea of how outrageously good your characterization is!

You are insanely good with the suspense in this too! You've got me going crazy trying to piece together exactly what he did from all of these hints that are being dropped. He stole from Lily and left Al for dead? Totally was not expecting! Though, I didn't really know what I was expecting, as you did such an awesome job keeping us on the edge of our seats. Anywho, you gave just enough information to have me satisfied that I have some idea what's going on, and yet I'm still practically bouncing from suspense!

I don't even know what to say about the narration, because there's no way I can formulate a sentence to tell you how fantastic I think it is. There's this undertone of mystery in it and I'm just totally in awe! I don't know how else to describe to you it's loveliness.

It's time to end the review when I run out of adjectives to tell you how gorgeous this is :P

I'm going to blame the poorly constructed nature of this review on the fact that I'm about to pass out from exhaustion but enjoyed this so much that I had to tell you so!

Brilliant, as always lovely! ♥

Author's Response: Oh Zinny, I can't thank you enough for this review. My reply is 7 months late almost to the day but you know what, my apology is going to be pretty half-hearted. If this wasn't in my 'unanswered reviews' section, it might never have caught my eye and LN would still be an unfinished wreck in a hidden corner of my computer. It was rereading this review that kickstarted my muse and I really cannot thank you enough.

So, if you waited until it was five chapters in, I think I've worked my 7 month late reply in as revenge :P

Oh not another oneee! You lot are all psychos. You're not meant to love him yet. Stop liking the bad boys. They'll only mess you up. Wait until chapter 7 onwards; that's when you can fall in love with him.

I'm so glad you think he's different though, and that you 'adore' him. Enormous undeserving compliments there but thank you, thank you, thank you.

All is not as it seems but yes, that's the current gist of it! I'm glad you didn't have any idea beforehand. My suspense actually works! Whoo!

Honestly, Zinny, I can't even express how grateful I am for this. It's over and done with now and I love you forever for leaving this one review which has made the entire thing happen.

Thank you to the ends of the earth and back again.
♥
xx

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