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Review:witch_in_training says:
That last line was heart-breaking. I had no idea what the title had to do with the story until that point; Then again, 'Good Night, Severus' doesn't exactly sound like an insult unless it's in context such as this.

I really liked the way you approached the "Albus is in Slytherin" topic. I'm personally in with the people who say he is a Slytherin, but when actually showing how he was Sorted, you have to be careful in making it sound plausible. I think you did that well.

The only thing that I thought was perhaps a little off was James's reaction. I suppose twelve-year-olds can tend to be dramatic, but something sounded forced when he was ranting off at Albus about how he'd betrayed the entire family. Other than that, though, I can't fault much.

Again, those last two words... I could almost feel the hit to the gut, the same way I imagine Albus felt.

Glad I found this in the Story Seekers recommendations. :)

Sami

Author's Response: I think in my mind James is extremely proud of the whole Gryffindor family legacy thing, so to have that image shattered for him was really upsetting. I hope it didn't sound too awkward though :)

I'm glad you enjoyed it, and thank you for the review!


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