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Review:melian says:
Farmgirl, I am bawling. Like a child. And it's not like I'm somewhere private where I can sob away to my heart's content so I have people looking strangely at me right now. This was an absolutely beautiful story and you captured the emotions magnificently - the sense of loss, the slow recovery, the way Ron tried to fill the void himself to make sure his kids didn't go without. I admit that it took me a few paragraphs to work out who the parents were, but once I had that sorted it was all smooth sailing. And I might add, it didn't actually matter that I didn't know who it was about because it was written so beautifully that it was tugging at my heartstrings regardless.

One typo that I noticed - scrapped knees instead of scraped knees - but aside from that nothing that raised an eyebrow. This is magnificent, farmgirl. You should be very proud of it.

cheers, Mel

Author's Response: Yeah, I guess I do really owe you some tissues, don't I! SORRY to do that to you! Did you survive without having to answer too many embarrasing quesitons?

I know this one can be a hard one to start and figure out what's going on, but I did that on purpose. And your praise has give me a HUGE head, knowing you compliment it despite the strange beginning and AUishness of it.

Thanks so much for reading! It was one of those things that I had in my brain for a long time, but one day it just hit me how to start it and it would be better with AU kids, and after that is was just so easy to write. Now, if only I could get my muse to do that all the time.

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