Report a Review

This service is designed to allow HPFF users to alert the staff about inappropriate reviews.

Review:Violet Gryfindor says:
Another fantastic chapter! I don't know what's funnier: imagining Louis speaking like a valley girl or the name Thomas Thomas. I can't believe that Dean would actually and sanely name his son that. XD But it's just another thing that makes your story so funny and amazing.

Louis's abject sadness at Sam's job offer makes him also a drama queen, but it's understandable because they're so close and she's going so far away. He may be a wizard, but even then, getting to Australia would still take a while, though maybe with his job he could manage to visit on official business. What it all does though is show how deep a relationship he has with Sam - it's an extremely close friendship - just a friendship ;) - and separating them is like separating identical twins.

But it should make Louis stronger, right? Not sure if that's possible, but who knows? He's still young.

Anyway, loved this. Going on to next. Will hopefully not lose all sense of grammar while reading your v. fun story.

Author's Response: Louis speaking like a valley girl :P You know thats the answer. Thomas Thomas is just downright unfortunate!

Drama drama drama! Drama queen is pretty much spot on actually. His angsting is really a bit over the top, would definitely be easier for him to travel than say you or me. At the same time, kind of have to let her go and do her own thing? Just a friendship! Seriously never meant for it to come across any other way, must have gone wrong somewhere though :P

Your grammar is fine, couple more chapters and you could well be in trouble though! Thanks again!


Your Name:
Reason for this Report:

Examples:
  • The review is offensive.
  • The review is spam or chit-chat (not actually a review).
  • The review was double posted.
  • The review has formatting problems.
Repeat the number: 164
Submit Report: