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Review:Capella Black says: a good way. I don't think I've read anything like this on HPFF, and it really spins off from the usual concepts. However, I like that - the point of writing is to create something new, and this side world, with its own traditions and abilities, certainly fits that bill.

I love how quickly we're enveloped into an entirely new situation, without losing track of potterverse altogether, or having anything that makes this seem unable to fit with said world. I've found myself with a million questions because of this, as the story asks more than it answers, but then that can be one of the best things about one-shots - they spark the imagination, rather than just giving you all the facts.

Still, it would be cool to see where this went... let me know if you ever continue it!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for all the nice comments! I'm so glad you liked concept behind all this!! :)

As for continuing it, you should know that this one-shot is actually a companion piece for my Novel; "All is NOT Fair in Love & War". This little scene here takes place right after Chapter 5. So if you still have questions, you might want to check the other story out too! It goes into way more detail about why Saleena has to return home in the first place... You never know, you might like it!! =)

I am glad to have introduced you to something new. Thanks for snagging me, lol!! I hope you will check out my Novel too! Thanks so much for the awesome review!! :D

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