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Review:Mayhem says:
I liked how you described the transformation!! I know I always have trouble with scenes where I want to go into explicit detail but I never seem able to find the right words and I just want to say you did really well. I wonder why the idea of werewolf mating seems so gross to Addie, I meanyou wouldn't do it witha stranger/friendbut if they were actual mates in their human forms I wonder if her impression of ww-mating would change.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm happy that you liked the description and that you think I did it well :D It's always good to hear that.

You definitely have a wonderful question. First off, Addie's only 16 years old and at 16 having sex in a form that's away from the norm or not your day to day body is definitely not something most 16 year olds would like to do. Secondly, it's not something she's completely comfortable with, and she probably wouldn't be until she was head over heels in love with him to attempt to.

So I hope that answers your question/wonderings :]
Don't hesitate to ask any more!


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