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Review:mizzxpearl says:
Hey! Back again. :)

I liked this chapter too. James seems to have matured. I wonder what it was that Remus talked to him about! I was only going to point out two things, but you pointed out on of them in your authors note already. :P The other thing was that I'm just a bit afraid that you're going to change Lily too much. Low cut shirts, too much make-up, not as much into studies? I think the opposite of those things are part of what makes her, her! You know?

Still, don't get me wrong, I'm greatly enjoying this story! I want to see more of Sirius' personality now! And of course, more James! And oh, PLEASE don't let Lily go out with Amos. :

Keep at it! :D

Author's Response: Aww, she hasn't really changed... she's just trying to fit in. Trust me, she'll be the Lily you know and love soon enough... that is, if I ever get my backside in gear for long enough to write the next few chapters!

Lily and Amos... well, you'll just have to see!

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