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Review:maskedmuggle says:
Hey! Wow. This is such a well written, cute Teddy/Victoire piece. I'm surprised to find it's your first - it could well be your tenth one.

With all your dialogue between Teddy/Victoire, you gave me a real sense of 'love'. I thought it was so sweet, and a very tender sort of story. Even though you had quite a lot of dialogue, I thought that your story flowed really well. We don't know that much about Teddy/Victoire but your characterisation of both of them, I thought was perfect. You contrasted Teddy with his quiet determination to Victoire's hesitation, and they balanced out so well. It really made the whole relationship even more believable, because they were different, because they weren't the same.

The whole idea of your story is pretty simple, but the way you wrote it made it so special. I have no criticisms whatsoever, no spelling mistakes, no grammar problems, no nothing. This is just such a beautiful piece of writing. :)

Author's Response: This is my favorite piece of work right now, so I'm so happy to see these reviews!

I'm really happy that you mentioned the contrast between their characters. It's something I pride myself on that the characters are easily distinguishable from each other.

Thank you so much for the reviews you have given me. I feel utterly spoiled.

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