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Review:Ronsgirl29 says:
Amazing.

Like whoa. You had such wonderful description of her feelings that I could practically feel Dominique's pain. Unrequited love is one of the worst things in the world, and I think you were able to capture the feeling of it perfectly.

I think the saddest part about this wasn't that Scorpius didn't love her back, it was that she felt invisible. The idea that your misery goes unoticed by those you love can destroy a person, an idea that you also captured wonderfully.

10/10
-Ronsgirl29

Author's Response: Wow. This review blew me away. Words cannot express how much this means to me - I want to thank you a million times over and over again right now, but I'll try and hold it back!

I'm so pleased that you enjoyed it. Yes, unrequited love is awful, but I'm glad you picked up on the fact that she's invisible being the worst part. I think that is truley horrible- she is in so much pain and it's almost pointless because nobody knows, but more importantly the person she is in pain over doesn't even know her. It's not like he's snubbed her, he simply doesn't know anything about her. The fact that you thought I captured those feelings perfectly really means a lot to me. Is it wrong that this was fun to write? It's miserable, but I enjoyed digging into her feelings.

I'm so grateful for you leaving this wonderful review. And wow - 10/10? That means so much and I feel very encouraged and inspired to write more now. Thank you so much for taking the time to review, it's very important to me and I really hope you enjoyed reading this!

I might have to knight you for leaving this review (regardless that your a girl and I don't have the power to knight people) ;)

Thank you!!
~ Helena


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