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Review:lia_2390 says:
Dude, you do not know how long it took me to finally get this review to you!

Anyway, hiya!

First let me say that this pairing is really obscure yet rather cute. I love how each of them are so oblivious to each others true situation, i.e. Both of them are strikingly similar. I also love how you wrote their own perspectives of the little reunion and the unspoken question of "So what have you been doing for the past sixteen years?" The answers too, made me laugh a little bit. Not because of the content but because they expected the other to do well when they really and truly did not.

What really caught my attention was how little they thought of themselves and how if they told each other how they really felt, there would be no need for those thoughts because they would have found the common ground with each other. It makes this story of yours kinda tragic that way.

I also loved your characterisation of Remus. It was always how I pictured him, especially his teenage-self. Sweet and shy =]

You mentioned in the TGS thread that you wanted someone to point out what you did wrong/right but as far as I can see, keep doing whatever it is you're doing.

I really enjoyed this story, you did a great job ^_^

Lia.

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