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Review:Violet Gryfindor says:
I feel bad for the poor Ambassador now. If only he knew what was coming to him. XD The coup should seem strange and out of the ordinary, but with this group of characters, it sounds entirely normal, just like the kind of thing they would do with their exceptional brain powers. Not to mention how much the plot only makes the story funnier. I can see this going badly for them, especially poor Louis.

I love your Molly! She is a lot like Dom, but she also seems to have an extra little spark to her - or maybe she just uses Dom's cunning in a different way. ;) You don't need to worry about your characters - they're fun to read about. :D

Off to the next chapter! I actually can't remember what comes next now, so I'll have to see. ^_^

Author's Response: I did a bit too but then I thought... Molly, and realised he didn't have SUCH a bad deal. But then again, even though I haven't worked out exactly how to deal with him, it's not going to end well :P
That's pretty much my favourite part of this actually. Almost everything that happens to them is completely ridiculous, only they're so used to it it doesn't even register. Partly arrogance, partly just whatever!

So do I! They're meant to be really very similar actually, gives me a fun little rivalry to play with. With Molly it's more all out, overt, flirtatious charm, whereas with Dom it's an initial charm backed with the imminent threat of violence :P

Thanks again! So glad you're enjoying it XD


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