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Review:Violet Gryfindor says:
Louis watches Muggle television? That suits him surprisingly well. XD From the sound of it, it's either crime or action shows, and it's definitely having a bad influence on him. I'd never noticed that before when I'd read this, which is weird, but it's the little details like that which really make this story for me.

Your portrayal of Harry is the best post-Hogwarts one I've seen. He's difficult to write, I find, so that you can make him canon, yet very much an adult is amazing. I so wish I could do that.

Another thing that's fantastic about this story is the dialogue, which is very snappy and drives the story along. What the characters say reveals a lot more about them than any description could do, and that's always great to see in a story.

Less blabber, more reading. The goal is to get through them all today. :D

Author's Response: I'd forgotten that actually! Clearly going to have to write it in somewhere, I reckon he'd be a fan of Westerns :P Really should pay better attention to my own story though, hey?

The BEST? Now you're just being silly! There has been lots and lots and lots of post-Hogwarts Harry written my many many brilliant authors. I don't knowww I just wrote him how I imagined he would turn out. The thing about Harry, for me, is that he's fundamentally a good person. Okay, so that's pretty much the entire point of the books, but do you see what I'm getting at?

Dialogue is definitely my fall-back. Pretty much any time things slow down or I get a bit stuck I pretty much go for a few lines of devastatingly witty repartee :P

Thanks again! You always pick up on these tiny little details, so much fun to read!

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