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Review:FannyPrice says:
Hello again! --waves--

I thought this was incredibly interesting. Short and sweet. The first paragraph especially pulled me in, and even though you use the word "affair" it seemed very plausible scene between Luna and Harry. I thought Luna in particular was very well characterized.

I do think an expansion on the emotional distance between Harry and Ginny would have leant a more emotional impact to the story, but, in reality, that is such a small critique. This really was very good, and set up very well in the short amount of words.

Another job very well done!!

Miranda

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I've always had difficulty with Luna so that's really wonderful to hear. Thank you so much for the advice. I tend to be a little cheap with my elaboration in my one-shots, so it's something that I'll have to continue to work on.

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