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Review:Renegade Niffler says:
Lately I've really been getting into stories that humanize otherwise unlikeable characters, and I think this one does that well. You've given them some depth without driving them off character. I love the repetition of "There's nowhere I'd rather be". In fact the last two lines really drive the piece home. Despite his pain, Blaise can't let her walk away, then she as-good-as spits in his face. Great job. :)

Author's Response: OK, wow. Thank you so much for taking the time to tell me you liked this piece. I was really trying to learn how to write properly flawed characters when I did this, and so it's nice to hear that I kept them canon while still humanizing them, which was the point.

Glad you liked the repetition too; it took me a while to get those lines to flow properly while having her use the exact same phrase!

Anyways, thanks so much for reviewing - you've made my Saturday!


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