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Review:kassandra466 says:
May I have some more?’ James asked Lily pointing to her cup

Lily laughed and passed it to him

‘Being Head Boy and you being Head Girl, it’s only right that we share information concerning the student body, would you agree?’ he asked Lily taking a tight sip from her tea, his pinkie standing to attention

‘Yes,’ Lily smiled

‘And of course being the one and only member of M.P.P. it’s important that I should keep you in the loop, am I right?’ he asked taking another tight sip and then giving the cup back to her

‘Sure,’ Lily said obligingly, taking the cup once again

‘M.P.P. what’s that?’ Rose asked

‘In joke,’ Lily said waving away her question, she was too interested in what James was taking so long in trying to get out.

‘They have in jokes now?’ Rose asked Autumn

‘Just one more sip,’ James said taking the cup out of her hands and taking a large gulp but this time he placed the cup on the table causing him to bend over and he turned his head and whispered so close to her ear that his lips brushed against her tragus he breathed

‘Sirius and Autumn were in the library last night researching foreign tongues, mostly each others,’

The shivers that ran up her spine as he partly kissed and breathed in her ear were cut short as the full impact of what James had just said hit her.

Her mouth fell open and leant away from him so she could turn to look at him, James smirked and nodded, his face was awfully close.

Lily’s limp jaw became a smiling gaping jaw as she laughed, she covered her mouth with her fingers

‘No,’ she said still smiling

‘Yes,’ James said smiling himself

‘I-I just.. I can’t...’ Lily stammered dropping her hand and looking at him

‘I know, me neither,’ James said nodding

Lily turned to look at Autumn disbelievingly though still smiling and pointed at her


The little colour that was remaining disappeared completely, Rose who had been watching James and Lily now turned to look at Autumn as though why Lily was pointing at her would become apparent, it didn't.

‘What?’ Rose asked as Autumn’s breathing became shallow

‘SIRIUS!’ she yelled making every one turn to look at him

He choked on his tea and looked to Autumn and then to Lily and James and then to Remus.

‘REMUS!’ Sirius shouted through clenched teeth

Remus looked from Sirius and then to Peter

‘Peter!’ Remus exclaimed

Peter then turned to James

‘James!’ he said snapped

‘Lily,’ James said in mock outrage putting a hand to his chest

Lily laughed

‘What is going on?’ Rose asked as Autumn dropped her head into her arms

‘Autumn and Sirius,’ Lily mouthed and then puckered her lips and tapped them with her index finger

‘WHAT!’ Rose laughed

Autumn let out a groan of despair

i LOVED it!! haha!! that was AMAZING! : D

Author's Response: one of my favourite moments too :D

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