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Review:LindaSnape says:
This was absolutely amazing!

To answer your concern - no, I didn't find that it was awkward, in the least.

I like how you incorporated the song lyrics in this piece. They seemed to flow rightly, and they didn't detract from the piece as sometimes some songs seem, too. If anything they seemed to fit right in.

I absolutely adore this!

So few stories are written about Lucy and Molly. So I was absolutely thrilled that not only was this a story about Molly, but a romance one. Albeit a tragic lover's tale, but a romantic one, all the same.

I loved your characterizations of Molly and Johnny. How Molly fretted over money, and yet was too stubborn to accept help from her parents.

It gave it a touch of realism.

Not to mention your command of the English language, your description, your narrative, and lack of grammatical errors is not only astounding, but quite lovely and only stands to enhance the piece.

Although, I think I did find one error: “Three pounds. It’ raining out.” It should be 'It's'? Shouldn't it? Unless this is a part of Johnny's dialect. However, as it's absent from the rest of the piece, I didn't really ascertain that.

However, one the whole this piece is absolutely enchanting, and I absolutely loved it!


Linders

Author's Response: Hi Linders!
Oh my goodness. What a lovely review! Thank you so much. I'm so very, very pleased to hear that you enjoyed this one-shot. I'll admit, I did feel a little awkward writing this--I rarely write straight romance and I never, ever write Next-Gen. ^_^

I'm thrilled to hear that you thought the song fit well with the fic. I thought it might come off as a little incongruent considering the story is set during the Next-Gen era and the song itself is an old Irish ballad.

And thanks so much for pointing out that typo! I knew one would sneak past me. It seems that no matter how many times I proofread a story, one pesky little typo gets past my notice. ;)

Again, thanks a million for everything! It was wonderful hearing from you, Linders. I'll feel much more confident approaching this genre/era in the future thanks to your kind feedback. ^_^ Take care and be well!

Best,
Lee Anne


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