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Review:Vermouth says:
Ballistic, huh? Well it won't be the first time that Severus had lost it in your stories, of course the results will never be catastrophic as "Snape's Worst Memories"...

Once more I must tell you the emotions you conveyed are brilliant. You once mentioned that writing the memories in the first-person perspective is better to convey the person's feelings. I agree with that. Of couse you must admit that for movie versions, like HBP, it just has to be done in the third-person, therefore creating an omnipotent view of story-telling. We get to see what happens behind people's backs and stuff.

I'm more than eagerly waiting for 'the axe to fall'. If it were me against his fury, I won't rule out the possibility to kneel down while listening to what Severus has to say. Of course, non-orientals would reserve kneeling for God, and not for a mere person, right?

Just a thought, though.

Vermouth

Author's Response: Yes, you're right. First person works well for writing but not videos or movies.

No, never like that with me . . .


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