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Review:Vermouth says:
Now THIS is what I call scary...

I mean, you once written things like someone being tortured to his last breath, but then his daughter was a miracle natural healer who can heal by pointing her fingers, so it didn't spook me at all because I had known she was able to patch everything up, fix every fiber, and I did not doubt that for a second. The same thing happened when you decided to knock her into a coma, and gathered the stength of dragons to heal her, it was just too obvious tht all will turn out fine, I mean why not? Her last thought was Sweetheart I love you... (no I feel just fine, and it certainly is a rational thing to think at the moment... not) With her poor boyfriend waiting, Heaven forbid she doesn't wake up. The results did not disappoint me, I was right. I chose not to review all of that because I felt rather uncomfortable reading predictable stuff.

But this... well I'm just not sure what will happen next any more. Maybe his stupid father could just die?

I wonder if your country's news network had covered this, but recently, some 23-year-old mother in Japan was arrested for starving her two children to death, just becuse her husband left her and she found them annoying! Do I hear you screaming in disbelief? I think so.

On a brighter note, though, I just love this story! I'm quite surprised that I am one of the very few people who review. I truly believe that raw pain and stuff are much harder to write than faerie realms and the sort. Please continue!


P.S. The 3rd chapter of Aftermath and the stone will be coming out soon! So when you see this, please read and review!

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