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Review:LindaSnape says:
Aw, Melissa, this was terribly sad!

Yet it was so well written!

I especially loved the flashbacks. They were sweet little tidbits and insights to the more intimate moments of Arthur and Molly's life that aren't described in the books. So that was quite interesting, I'll admit.

Not to mention, they were triggered by something. I like flashbacks most when they appear triggered by a thought, a memory, a sound, a taste, a scent, etc. To just be there out of thin air, well, it's possible but not entirely plausible to me. So, I really liked it in this piece. Molly's flashbacks made sense.

I didn't find any spelling or grammatical errors, which is quite nice. It's any easy enough mistake to make, but I absolutely adore pieces that don't have any or not ones that I caught on first glance. Polished pieces truly do make my day.

I loved the characterization of both Molly and your OC. Molly was spot on and your OC seemed like such a nice guy.

I have to admit that I was both saddened and angry by the ending. Sad because Arthur was dead, and a bit annoyed that you had to kill him. :( Arthur!

But it was a tragically beautiful piece so I see why it was done. I just don't like it. (And by it, I meant Arthur dying. I do like the piece.) Ha ha!

Beautiful work, though!


Linders

Author's Response: Linders.

I have attempted replying to this review about a dozen times and each time it has eaten my response. :( I think that it will work this time... but I can't remember half of the wonderful things I had meant to say to you. So, thank you for this review. It really means a lot.

-Melissa


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