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Review:DarkLadyofSlytherin says:
That was sad, Melissa!

What I loved about this sweet, yet sad fic, was that the flashbacks were in chronological order backwards. It was rather interesting to read. In doing so, I think the reader was able to get a feel of Arthur and Molly's life, as if it were flashing before their eyes starting with the freshest memory - that of Arthur on the roof - and working its way backwards to the day he proposed. It was amazing.

I did find one sentence that bothered me slightly out of all of it, but that's great if it was only one sentence. Her heart sank skipped a beat, I don't think a heart can sink and skip a beat without another word in between or at least Her heart sank skipping a beat. But that's just my personal opinion.

Otherwise, I enjoyed this immensely and I'm so glad you wrote it! It wasn't overly fluffy or too depressing.

Author's Response: Aww. Thank you, Len!

I came up with the idea because I was brainstorming the ways I could use the assigned line of dialogue. I tried writing the flashbacks in chronological order, but for some reason kept coming back to them in reverse. I hoped that by reading it that way, the reader grew closer to Molly and Arthur's realationship as the fic progressed.

I'm so happy that you enjoyed this and didn't find it too depressing.

hmm. I shall fix that sentance, because I can tell you right now that that isn't what it is supposed to say. :P Thanks for pointing that out!

xx


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