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Review:LindaSnape says:
This was lovely! I loved the descriptive language of the piece. It flowed quite nicely together. This wasn't just a normal tale of a break up it was the shattering of someone's heart at it's core, and I really enjoyed that (as twisted as that may sound).

I also loved how obscure the pairing was. I don't think I've ever seen or read a Hugo/Lorcan before this. It was quite an interesting ship.

As far as characterizations go you got Luna spot on. I absolutely adored her. & I like the characterizations of Hugo and Lysander.

I could sense the tension in the room, and I couldn't help but pity poor Lorcan.

Great job with this piece. It was certainly original and unique! I really could appreciate that.

As far as spelling, grammar, and syntax go I didn't find any errors. So kudos there. Pieces with polished grammar are always something I can appreciate.

Great job with this piece! Though, depressing and strained, the melody of this piece was quite beautiful.

♥
Linders

Author's Response: Oh, wow, thank you!

I was absolutely terrified to write Luna. I usually try to stay away from Hogwarts Era canon characters, because I'm always so scared I'll write them completely wrong and people will throw eggs at my house. But thank you! My mind is eased. :)

Ah, Hugo/Lorcan. I didn't think I'd read one of these before, so I decided to try my own! I'm really glad you liked the result. Lorcan just seemed like the kind of person who would have his heart -literally- on the floor.

Thank you so much! I'm... flattered. I appreciate it more than you know.

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