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Review:PenguinsWillReignSupreme says:
Argh, this is going to be haaard - reviewing the authors I stalk always is so I'm going to keep it very short and sweet. Or short and sweet for me, anyway.

This is such a fantastic concept of a story. I remember seeing the thread around this - or maybe a conversation about it in the cbox - and being so intrigued, but it was during my reading/reviewing abstinence period so I couldn't read it. It was on my ever-growing to read list, in fact, until you requested this.

This is a brilliantly executed first chapter (of course). It flows fantastically and I just looove reading your writing. You always make it so interesting that it's impossible not to carry on reading.

Lily's character - it's only one chapter but you've brought her across absolutely amazingly. I envy everyone who can manage to bring across so much background information so effortlessly and subtly like you have here. The way that we learn so much about Lily, her routine, her relationships and so on really comes across well here.

Erm, running out of things to say because your writing is flawless. That last line is rather JKR, I must admit. I like it very muchly and it sounds so wonderfully ominous! I can't wait to see what happens now - of course, the summary addresses a lot but you know, twists and turns and so on await us and it's exciting!

Fantastic, lovely, and I wish I could be more helpful and coherent but it's just too good.


Author's Response: Gah, I just wrote an entire response and my computer decided to delete it all. >< Let's try this again.

I actually wrote this chapter a bit differently than I usually do. I mean, usually I just write it in one sitting, read over it a couple times, and then post away. But this time, I was genuinely concerned with how it would be read, so I wrote it in several different sittings, kept changing descriptions and paragraphs around, and kept it to myself for a while before deciding to post it up. So, anyway, I'm really pleased that you liked it! Especially after all this effort.

Lily! I love Lily. ... That's really all I have to say on the matter.

Gah, anyway, thank you so much! I really... wow. I'm flattered. Thank you!

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