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Review:DemetersChild says:
Wow, just wow. I saw the banner for this story in your signature on the forums, so I rushed to your Author's Page to try to find it. This story is just amazing. It really sums up James and Lily and exactly why I love the ship so much.

Just a few things to point out, in your title, the I in Fire is capitalized, which I don't think was on purpose. :P

Also, it seemed to me that you used the word "kiss" one too many times during that little scene, so if there's a way to replace one or two of them, I think it would flow a bit better.

I really loved this story. And it looks like you're quite the popular author, so I'll have to check out the rest of your stories as well!

Magically Yours,

Dem

Author's Response: Really? It wasn't supposed to be the banner for that story initially, but I couldn't think of a better plot to fit the banner. It's a great surprise that you went to find the story that matched the signature! :D

It could be capitalized on purpose... you never know. ;) You're the first person in. five years? to tell me that, so you definitely need an award. Thanks for pointing thta out!

I wasn't looking to edit the story at all - it's in pristine teenaged-me condition. Not that I can, at the moment, think of another way of saying "kiss" without rewriting the whole scene with my current style, and with so many other stories in the works right now, this one is long forgotten. It's a very good point you've made, and something I myself follow these days. :)

Popular in some ways more than others. but thank you for saying that all the same! I do hope that it's true!

Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review this story! I really appreciate hearing from you! :D


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