Report a Review

This service is designed to allow HPFF users to alert the staff about inappropriate reviews.

Review:JLHufflepuff says:
I like the way this starts out with James obsessing over Lily and Malfoy. It seems very like something he would do. I also enjoy your characterization of the M'rauds. They are not my favorite usually, but that is because of bad characterization in most cases. Yours, however, is very refreshing. You even bothered to characterize Peter - kind of absent-minded almost?

I love the scene where Lucius is using his typical powers of intimidation on the Head Boy so that he can be partnered with Lily. It reminds me a bit of Lucius in one of the books (OOTP?). The whole Prefect meeting in general was interesting. I've wondered about what those were like, and yours was, well, a typical meeting with some drama thrown in. I liked that it was from Remus's perspective! Could he have been reading something about dark creatures? ahem?

Anyway, this story is great, and I look forward to the next chapter!!

Author's Response: Ahh, the Marauders. I do love them so! But I agree that they are often not characterized well. And it's a huge pet peeve of mine when people skip over Peter as the oddball of the group. He was a person, too, even if he did end up being a traitor. (btw, you just helped me realize another Biblical reference in HP: Peter (Judas) betrays James, and then realizes what he's done and end up (however unwittingly) killing himself.../endrant)

I felt Lucius would be a rather intimidating person even as a teen, obviously something he carries on to adulthood. I rather liked that it didn't work. :P

And I honestly just created Amy so that the meeting could go quickly. >.<

I am so glad you noticed the book! It's very important, so you have a good eye.

The perspectives will change a lot throughout this story (Lily and Lucius aren't the only characters involved, after all!) and I have to say I loved writing from Remus's point of view. ^^ He's definitely one of my favorite characters.

Thank you for such a lovely lovely review!

Magically Yours,


Your Name:
Reason for this Report:

  • The review is offensive.
  • The review is spam or chit-chat (not actually a review).
  • The review was double posted.
  • The review has formatting problems.
Repeat the number: 989
Submit Report: