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Review:Jazzeh Turnip says:
This is such a lovely story, despite it being a little bit of a sad one. I don't like R/Hr or H/G, but considering this fic shows them having difficulties in their relationships, I like it. That's probably mean of me, but nevermind, haha!

The little story Hermione was telling at the beginning is such a typical housewifey thing, haha. My mum and her friends talk like that all the time, and laugh at things that aren't even really that funny and usually at the expense of the people they're married to.

Rose was written beautifully. It was so stunning, her thinking about the divorce and all the stuff about her being good at hiding... it took my breath away. I don't usually like Rose, but I love this version of her character. I can't get over how much I like Rose.

I love the end sentence too. It's so simple and seems like a fairly vague way of ending something, but I really think it works with this.

What I love most of all though is that you actually use parenthesis properly. I've read fics where authors have randomly used them and put authors notes in the middle of a section, but you used them well! YAY! I love you for that :)

10/10 Lorren.

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