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Review:butterbeergal says:
Dude, this was totally made of WIN. Again, same style as MM and TT, but this had a lot more crazy and flouncing and such. Absolutely TERRIFIED of Dom, but head over heels in love with her nevertheless. I bet it was a ball writing her here - all that flash and pouting and twirling. Priceless.

Also, one very important point -

ZOMG YOUR HARRY IS THE SMEXIEST VERSION I'VE EVER MET. Seriously. Was gushing and drooling when I was reading that scene between him and Dom. Like WHOA. Had I known he'd turn out to be like this, I'd have loved him from the start. But yeah, your Harry is pure alpha male through and through (my weakness XD).

Could I possibly have, I don't know, even just 5% of your talent and wit and all that jazz?

HAD A BLAST READING THIS, just in case it wasn't obvious.

Author's Response: Gill! How am I meant to keep up with all your reviews you crazy thing? Oh man, SO much flouncing and crazy in this. It's Dom without any sort of restraint or moderating influence (i.e. Louis or similar.) That's pretty much where I am on her as well. Think if she was actually real I'd be found hiding behind the nearest chair. Was actually quite hard writing her right at the start. Just in terms of keeping the crazy consistent and still kind of a bit believable. Once I got going it was all kinds of win though!

Hahahahaha is he really? There you go then. This is pretty much exactly how I imagined him to turn out, at least the work side of him. I mean, think of everything he went through by the time he was 18, then on top of that everything he must have seen as an Auror. Would make anyone fairly hardcore I imagine. Actually do think he'd be a complete softy with his kids, Lily especially, and probably with Rose and Hugo as well. Anyway, pretty sure you don't care about that stuff.

OH SHUDDUP! You know I'll give you 6%. I'm generous and giving like that. But seriously, SHUDDUP AND STOP BEING RIDICULOUS.
Once again, thank you SO much lovely!

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