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Review:DeaVanity says:
Hello, I'm FINALLY here with your requested review :)

I'm so sorry I wasn't able to do this earlier but life suddenly got hectic though I've managed to work everything out ^^

Anyhow - the one-shot was full of cuteness. ;) The descriptive language you've used at the beginning was amazing, I could really get the whole picture in my head. I'd suggest that you maybe, if you wish and think it would be okay, add a bit of a more description on Draco and Ginny. Even though we, as readers, can imagine them due to the books and the movies, I think it would add something extra to the story :)

Oh, and I loved the part about house elves, I've always found that they make me go all warm and fuzzy inside, especially when I remember Dobby...

I've noticed a few spelling errors, though I'm sure if you read the story once again, you'll fix them :D

All in all - I liked it ;)

Author's Response: Hi sorry for the late response my computer is broken. This reply is being done on my phone so i am sorry for mistakes.
About the bit about adding more description in about Ginny and Draco. I am getting round to that i was planning doing it when i got back but like i said my computer broke. House elfs are the cutest! :-).
I will read through it and double check spellings thank you for the heads up.
Ginny45 xxx


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