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Review:Jane_Volturi says:
Hi there hun, it's me again. I was just scrolling lazily around the archives and I came across this cute little one/shot of yours whilst searching for some Draco/Ginny material to entertain my incredibly overworked brain. It's very rare that I ever see this pairing in a story, I don't know why that is but it all seems to be about Draco/Hermione these days and Ginny hardly ever gets a chance in the spotlight.

This was a really cute One-Shot. In all honesty it was a real pleasure to read. It was short, light and it made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside because there was no angst or complex plotline hovering in the background. I also like the fact that there was no dialogue in this story - ooh, I love stories with no dialogue, it shows the writers ability to show rather than tell which is something that I think you handled really well.

The description that you used at the beggining was stunning may I add. I could picture it all in my head almost as if I was there, and it was just so pretty to imagine.

I also like the storyline - it's quite light and romantic; overall a real pleasure to read.

I honestly could find no fault with this story, it was a lovely One-Shot and it's definitley going into my favourites without a doubt.

I hope you do write the other One-Shots, they'd be great to read, especially the Harry and Luna one - I haven't seen many stories with that ship either.

Keep up the magnificent work.

10/10

Katie (JaneTwilight)

Author's Response: Hi! sorry for the late response and all the mistakes in this reply my computer is broken and i'm stuck doing this on my phone. I adore Ginny/Draco my second favorite ship after James/Lily. I'm glad someone else feels the same about all the Dramione stories.
I didn't actually set out to not use much dialouge it just didn't fit right in my mind.
I have finished the Harry/Luna one and started the James/Lily one.
I really wanted to use more description in the story and i'm glad people like it.
Yay got favorited :-D.
thank you so much for reviewing i greatly appreciate it. Ginny45 xxx


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