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Review:Elizabeth_Black says:
This story was really really good! I like it a lot!

The way you describe the feelings of the characters is brilliant, and they whole story line was very well thought out. You show a whole other side to Lucius, which is fantastic.

It was interesting reading about Eva and the way her feelings changed over time. Likewise for Lucius.

And I loved how Eva had, in a way, saved Lucius' marriage to Narcissa and mended the relationship between father and son, as well.

Really good job - you are a great writer!

10/10 + favouriting XD

~Lizzie

Author's Response: Wow, thank you very, very much. To be honset I did not think I would be getting any more reviews for this story, so thank you once again.

I'm really glad you liked the way I described character feelings--I had to write,delete and re-write certain parts many times before they ended up the way I wanted them to be so I'm glad you think that ended up well.

The reason I wrote this story is manly because I wanted to show a different side to Lucius as he is one of myfavourite characters.

Yes, well Eva was never meant to be evil, just hurt and seeking revange. But she later realized that revange was not the answer, so she decided to leave them alone.

Once again thank you so, so, so much for such a wonderful review and I'm glad you enjoyed this story.

Merope :)


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