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Review:confusedlover says:
very lovely.

first off, i wanted to apologize to you for taking so long to get to this. nearly a month! that is crazy. usually it doesn't take me even a week and i am terribly sorry that this had to happen. some things came up and i honestly have had no time the past three weeks. until now of course!

i thought this was a wonderful addition to the other two chapters that i read awhile ago. really. there was a lot of information in this chapter and although it was throughout the whole thing basically, it wasn't a bad thing. you are setting up the story very well and i can't wait for the real plot to start! the way you are working things is the best way there is. keep it up! you are doing a fantastic job of working things slowly and making sure the readers are keeping up with what you are doing and not getting left behind.

the plot? all i can say is wow! i adore the three gods part with this. that's a very original idea, as if this story already wasn't original enough. i am definitely excited to figure out who the third god is!

overall, i thought this was a very well-written chapter. you have done a lot with this story so far and it has so much potential. i have a feeling that you know where you are going with this, and even if you don't, i can't tell which is also something most readers like to hear. i am certain that you have a good handle on things so far and i don't see how you could lose that now. i am thoroughly impressed with all of this so far. i can't wait to check out the next chapter and once again apologize for taking so long to give you these two reviews!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the kind review I'm glad you're enjoying it so far.

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