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Review:RonsGirlFriday says:
Plot thickens!

At the risk of being completely redundant, the characterizations are progressing so well. Hermione is so unbelievably believable. XD Her passion for social justice, her silent frustration at feeling like she's the only one who cares about these causes. She seems so completely invested and competent in her work.

And you've done such a great job of setting the mood here. It's perfect, really. Their interaction and attitude towards one another just jumps off the page, like they're right here in the room with me and I can see how they're looking at each other and hear the tone with which they're speaking to each other. It's a really well-crafted setup.

Melanie

Author's Response: Definitely good to know that Hermione is also turning out well in this. She's harder to write, probably because she's so into the mystery and serious about the whole matter, while Draco is very nonchalant. She puts her heart into her work, and capturing that is... almost strange. Not used to feeling that way. XD

Really?! That's truly awesome to hear! With this story, I'm trying to keep the descriptions and plot simpler, without any distractions - it's technically a closed-room mystery, and hopefully that'll mean more of that well-craftedness will come in future chapters. ;)

Thanks so much for the reviews, Melanie! It's fantastic to receive reviews from you! ^_^


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